In the beginning part 1
One day while Zoe was working on her fathers farm, a group of adventures came passing by, they did not worry Zoe , as this kind of thing was a regular occurrence on the outer farms. She did notice that the strangers did seem to be in a hurry, as they approached her she could see that they were not in very good shape, one of them was more cuts than skin. They did not stop at the farm but shouted to Zoe Run, run for your life! as they passed her with great speed. This was unusual and Zoe being very inquisitive decided to have a look over the hill to see what had scared the adventures so much, as she approached the hills top she could feel her pulse quicken and her hands started to shake.
Her eyes had just started to peer over the hill when she was suddenly forced back with great force, a fierce pain shot through Zoe s chest and she could feel her lungs filling with blood, as she gained her breath back and sat up, she gazed down and was panicked when she saw what appeared to be the end tip of a sheaf arrow sticking out from her chest. She tried to pull it out but the pain was so intense that she found herself paralysed, just then a dark figure appeared at the top of the hill, he was clearly a Knight of some sort as he was covered head to toe in plate mail, Zoe started to feel relived as all Knights were good werent they?
The dark figure approached Zoe , Help me Zoe asked, it was just then that Zoe noticed that the man approaching her carried a Long bow, and she also could see that the man which was now on top of her had a Evil look in his eyes and was grinning form ear to ear. Many people know of me, many people have faced me, but no one has ever remembered me! the dark figure of a man knelt down next to Zoe and drew out a Dagger, the sun shinning on the sharpened blade, he continued to say My name is Fred, have you heard of me? he smiled as he lifted is eye brow.
For a moment Zoe twisted and turned in her mind, what should she say? There was a mad man in front of her, and a Knight at that! I have never heard of you stranger Zoe pronounced, Fred sat there for what seamed like an eternity and then suddenly pounced at Zoe , Zoe tried to dodge the dagger but in her weakened state had no chance, the dagger pierced through her shoulder as though it was butter, Zoe expected the pain to follow but there was none, she thought to herself how strange it was that in the moment of her death she was contemplating why she was feeling no pain. This was her last thought as her head hit the grass, she could feel her body giving up the fight and her eyes closed.
what ya think? if its naf then I will maybe spare ya all me writing a follow on lmao










One day while Zoe was working on her fathers farm, a group of adventures came passing by, they did not worry Zoe , as this kind of thing was a regular occurrence on the outer farms. She did notice that the strangers did seem to be in a hurry, as they approached her she could see that they were not in very good shape, one of them was more cuts than skin. They did not stop at the farm but shouted to Zoe Run, run for your life! as they passed her with great speed. This was unusual and Zoe being very inquisitive decided to have a look over the hill to see what had scared the adventures so much, as she approached the hills top she could feel her pulse quicken and her hands started to shake.
Her eyes had just started to peer over the hill when she was suddenly forced back with great force, a fierce pain shot through Zoe s chest and she could feel her lungs filling with blood, as she gained her breath back and sat up, she gazed down and was panicked when she saw what appeared to be the end tip of a sheaf arrow sticking out from her chest. She tried to pull it out but the pain was so intense that she found herself paralysed, just then a dark figure appeared at the top of the hill, he was clearly a Knight of some sort as he was covered head to toe in plate mail, Zoe started to feel relived as all Knights were good werent they?
The dark figure approached Zoe , Help me Zoe asked, it was just then that Zoe noticed that the man approaching her carried a Long bow, and she also could see that the man which was now on top of her had a Evil look in his eyes and was grinning form ear to ear. Many people know of me, many people have faced me, but no one has ever remembered me! the dark figure of a man knelt down next to Zoe and drew out a Dagger, the sun shinning on the sharpened blade, he continued to say My name is Fred, have you heard of me? he smiled as he lifted is eye brow.
For a moment Zoe twisted and turned in her mind, what should she say? There was a mad man in front of her, and a Knight at that! I have never heard of you stranger Zoe pronounced, Fred sat there for what seamed like an eternity and then suddenly pounced at Zoe , Zoe tried to dodge the dagger but in her weakened state had no chance, the dagger pierced through her shoulder as though it was butter, Zoe expected the pain to follow but there was none, she thought to herself how strange it was that in the moment of her death she was contemplating why she was feeling no pain. This was her last thought as her head hit the grass, she could feel her body giving up the fight and her eyes closed.
what ya think? if its naf then I will maybe spare ya all me writing a follow on lmao
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