I actually think it is very well written dear and would like to see more of it... A lot more of it... Hehehe. Though.. Why would you kill yourself off, seems like a rather short story. Though if you ask me I like a Mass of short stories then one that goes on for a long time. Makes it a little easier to read and I like variety.

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